Sunday, May 27, 2007

Poetry Monday

Sometimes I jot down little notes when I'm making dinner. For example:

"You are a fucking potato head"

Those hard eyes of yours.
I want to pull them off and
put them where your mouth used to be.

I want to unpeel you and put your
dirty skin down the garbage disposal and
see your underneath, all your bruises.

I want to remove your ears and put them
where your eyes used to be and
then you might hear me.

I could slice off the dark spots with my
sharp little paring knife and
you would be good then.

I could do those things.

Then I could drop you in a big pot
and draw you a very hot bath and
wait until you got all soft in your center.

I’d mush you up, mix you up
with butter, sour cream, and
chives.

I'd scoop you up with my fingers,
my potato head, and
eat you.

21 Comments:

Blogger R.G. ALEXANDER said...

I love you. I'm slightly disturbed, hungry, and a little turned on at the same time. LOL ;)

9:45 PM  
Blogger Lillian Feisty said...

LOL, RG. Sweet.

9:45 PM  
Blogger Karen Erickson said...

I like potatoes. A lot. I have a friend who likes them even more. I shall direct her to your blog.

10:05 PM  
Blogger Emma said...

Fucking amazing. Seriously, I always knew you were talented but that poem just cemented it. Wow. Seriously, just wow.

10:07 PM  
Blogger Shelli Stevens said...

I love that poem! It freaking rocks. You know what? YOU freaking rock!

10:15 PM  
Blogger Rhian / Crowwoman said...

i think i hate you feisty-wench, you are simply too damn talented for the rest of us mere mortals.

"I could cut off your bruises with my sharp little paring knife and
you would be good then."

The whole thing is beyond brilliant and into supernova genius. okay, so maybe i don't hate you. but once again i find myself green, green, GREEN!

6:06 AM  
Blogger Rinda Elliott said...

Wickedly cool. And damn, I have felt like this before so I get it.

8:30 AM  
Blogger julia said...

"I want to unpeel you and put your
dirty skin down the garbage disposal and
see your underneath, all your bruises."

Me too! How did you see inside my heart? Such a strong voice for the narrator. Good to have a feminine strength that's not simply angry.

9:28 AM  
Blogger Robin L. Rotham said...

BLOL! Remind me to pay attention when you're talking to me, Lil. Excellent!

9:31 AM  
Blogger Ann said...

Oh my. Great poem. I'm speechless.

12:27 PM  
Blogger Crystal Jordan said...

This is hot. I don;t know why.But I suddenly want to have sex on my kitchen counter.

12:53 PM  
Blogger Lillian Feisty said...

Okay, you people are insane on so many levels.

But seriously, I do tend to make up stories about food when I'm cooking. I have a strange obsession with food, and I do love to eat mashed potatoes with my fingers.

2:02 PM  
Blogger Seeley deBorn said...

How brilliantly twisted!

I'm trying to imagine smashed taters as a sensual food in a love scene....

It's not working.

5:16 PM  
Blogger Tempest Knight said...

I don't think I'll see potatoes the same way after reading this.

7:26 PM  
Blogger Joy Renee said...

I don't know how i'm going to eat mashed potatoes at the table in front of my husband and MIL the next time she serves them. I hope I will have spent some time in the sun that day so they can think it's a sunburn.

this was my first ride on the poetry train:
http://joystory.blogspot.com/2007/05/monday-poetry-train-1.html

9:09 PM  
Blogger Anna J. Evans said...

Lol. I'm with the people who find this weirdly sexual. The potato was a bad boy and deserving of his punishment and...I think he's going to enjoy it if I know potatoes.

Try mixing him with some cream cheese and a little bit of roasted garlic next time. To die for, and finger licking good.

Great poem Lil F. You are so funny/clever/twisted :). My favorite combo--

Anna J. Evans

5:44 AM  
Blogger Ellen said...

I love it!

8:19 AM  
Blogger Eden Bradley said...

You are my twisted sister. :)

10:12 AM  
Blogger Isabella Snow said...

You scare me, Lillian.

1:47 PM  
Blogger Lillian Feisty said...

I scare myself, Ms. Snow. I mean, have you ever had such a relationship with a potato? It's frightening.

7:21 PM  
Blogger Isabella Snow said...

Somewhere I bet there's a rights group for potatoes, lol!

Hmm. Im going to google that.

1:43 PM  

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